Forward/emagazine Student Critics Competition 2018 – The Results

The Forward/emagazine Young Critics Competition 2018 offered students from 14 to 19 (and their teachers) the opportunity to respond to their choice of poem from the Best Collection and Best First Collection shortlists in one of two ways: a critical appreciation or a creative response, alongside a reflective commentary. The competition was judged by the editors of emagazine (the quarterly magazine for advanced level students published by the English and Media Centre) and the poet Sinéad Morrissey (winner of the Best Collection in 2017 for 'On Balance').

Comments on the Competition

Barbara Bleiman, one of the editors of emagazine, said of the whole collection of entries:

As always, we have been hugely impressed by the best entries to the competition. In almost every category, we have read writing that has been eloquent, engaged, thoughtful and sharply focused. 

It is interesting to note that in both age categories – 14-16, 16-19 – the creative response to a poem, accompanied by a commentary on the chosen poem, has been of an exceptionally high standard by comparison with the purely critical writing. Shortlisting the creative writing was really tough – there were so many brilliant poems to choose between, and such fantastic commentaries too. Much of the writing in the commentaries, interestingly, surpassed that of the purely critical that we saw (winners and shortlisted entries aside, of course). In the 14-16 age category, we decided to award two first prizes for the Creative Writing and, sadly, none for the critical, to reflect this disparity. 

We’ve been asking ourselves why it is that the students who wrote their own poems also wrote so well about the poems on which they were based. Is it because the engagement with the original poem is of a different kind to the analytical thinking they are being expected to do in preparation for exams? Have they had to ‘get under the skin’ of the poem, in order to draw from it something that inspires their own writing? Is it because the act of writing a poem pushes them to read the original with more attention, and closer scrutiny? Or perhaps, rather, it’s the reverse – that it pushes them to identify some big, significant aspects of the poem that they can then speak about with authority and conviction? This is a question for teachers as well as students. We have no definite answers. It seems strange that students are writing better in a form they’ve not been taught to write in – a commentary – than in a form they have been taught to write in – a critical analysis. Whatever the answers, it’s worth all of us, students and teachers alike, noting that the very best critical writing that we saw, across the whole competition, spoke with an authentic voice, didn’t try to impress with lots of literary terminology, genuinely noticed significant and interesting things, had something to say that was expressed clearly, simply and convincingly. It went down big roads, ending up at a major destination, rather than following small dirt tracks that led nowhere. It took an angle that it pursued and developed, rather than dotting around analysing detail for the sake of it. It spoke to the reader.

When you read the winning writing, in all of the categories, I hope you’ll see what we mean by this.

The Poems

Click here to download the poems students responded to – the shortlisted for the Forward Best Collection and Best First Collection.

To read the winning and highly-commended entries, click on the name of the winner (below).

16-19 Critical

  • 1st place: Freya Buxton (Queen’s School) in response to ‘Day, with Hawk’
  • Highly Commended: Erika Yip (Milton Academy ) in response to 'Girl to Snake' and Cameren Birch-Ghose (Caroline Chisholm School), in response to ‘dinosaurs in the hood’ 
  • Commended: Molly Thompson (King Edward VI High School for Girls)

16-19 Creative

  • 1st place: Natalie Perman (Withington Girls’ School) for 'do you remember?' in response to ‘Do You Speak Persian?’
  • Highly Commended: Aidan Tulloch (Thirsk School and Sixth Form College) for 'Lament in A Minor for Fiddle and Great Skua' in response to 'Do You Speak Persian?' and Mahira Mannan (Haggerston School) for 'Poem'  in response to ‘dinosaurs in the hood’ 
  • Commended: Cia Mangat (St Paul’s Girls’ School) and Dominic James (Wren Academy)

14-16 Creative

  • Joint 1st place: Katie Kirkpatrick (Soham Village College) for 'disposable camera', in response to 'Good Names for Three Children' and Eleanor Joan Harvey (International School of Los Angeles) for 'Sighting of a Highland Sparrow Hawk', in response to 'Day, with Hawk'
  • Commended: Rosie Schierig (Whitley Bay High School) and Iona Bennett (Roundhay School)

Teacher Critical

Teacher Creative

  • 1st place: Matt Oliver (Bede’s School): ‘Nightjars, Umbria’ in response to 'Day, with Hawk'
  • Commended: Olga Dermott-Bond (Rugby High School), Celia Shephard (Dulwich College International Shanghai Pudong) and Neil Bowen (Wells Cathedral School).